This is an example but feel free to use your own ideas
Remember to use
Statement, Examples, eXplanation, whY paragraphs
Most of you are forgetting to explain the points and give your opinion.
- Introduction (make it interesting , grab the readers attention)
What is the directors intention of film e.g. what are the themes/issues he was trying to get across
Make sure you introduce the film & director
Your opinion of the film & the themes/issues raised
- Paragraph 1
Hope as central theme, what is the message
How is it shown through different characters, dialogue, technical effects
Compare & contrast the journeys of Brooks, Red & Andy
Why is this theme important to someone your age? Do you agree with the idea that hope is important. Why/Why not?
- Paragraph 2 (link to last paragraph)
Prisons are horrible – give examples from film
These conditions make prisoners inhumane, institutionalised and unable to reintegrate into society (how is this shown examples)
Sometimes there is miscarriages of justice (give examples)
How can this be avoided today, has this improved.
Should we have death Penalty? Harder sentences/ less parole? Can prisoners be rehabilitated. 3 Strikes policy?
- Paragraph 3 (Link to others)
Redemption as a theme
Show how Andy, Red, Warden, Hadley all get there redemption. Contrast these charecters
Karma – if you are a bad person it will catch up to you. Give examples of how this is shown in film
How does hypocrisy and corruption make you feel about the charecters. What was your feeling when they finally got their judgement?
Through hard work and perseverance and never giving up hope Andy & Red were able to get Redemption – What messages are there for us?
Do you like this theme? Why/why not
- Conclusion
Restate your opinion, would you recommend this for year 12 audience. Why? Use the themes/ideas to help with your message.
Concluding statements that wrap up what the ideas you have talked about.
